Develop Your Script
Professional feedback to help you strengthen your script and move it forward.
If you’ve written a script but feel unsure about structure, pacing, or whether it’s working as a whole, this service gives you clear, honest, and practical feedback.
Choose a development edit
If ready for detailed feedback, you can select the option that best matches your script length and stage.
Each edit is tailored to your project and designed to give you clear, actionable next steps.
Short Film / Theatre Script (1–20 pages)
- Perfect for early drafts, short scripts, or testing an idea.
- Get focused, professional feedback to help you strengthen your concept and move forward with clarity.
- 2 pages of clear, actionable development notes
- Feedback on structure, pacing and dialogue
- 1-week turnaround
- Need it faster? Express service available (email for details)
TV / Theatre Script (20–69 pages)
- Ideal for pilots, longer scripts, or developing full ideas.
- Gain in-depth feedback on how your script is working as a whole, with clear direction on what to improve.
- 4 pages of detailed development notes
- Insight into structure, pacing, character and flow
- 2-week turnaround
- Need it faster? Express service available (Email for details)
Feature Film / Full-Length Theatre Script (70–120 pages)
- Comprehensive feedback for complete or near-complete scripts
- A full development edit designed to help you refine your story and prepare for the next stage.
- 6–8 pages of in-depth development notes
- Detailed feedback on structure, character arcs and overall impact
- 4-week turnaround
- Need it faster? Express service available (email for details)
What you’ll gain
After your development edit, you’ll:
Understand how your script is working as a whole
Know what needs improvement and why
Have clear, practical next steps
Feel more confident in how to revise your work
Who this is for
This is for you if:
You’ve written a script but aren’t sure it’s working yet
You feel stuck or unsure what to fix
You want honest, professional feedback before taking it further
You’re serious about improving your work and moving it forward
About the script consultants
This service is led by a professionally trained script and screenwriters experienced in story development across both page and screen. They offer honest, constructive feedback designed to help you strengthen your work and move it forward.
Prefer to talk it through first?
If you’re not sure what your script needs, or which option is right for you, you can start with a short conversation.
In this 30-minute call, we’ll:
- look at where you are with your script
- identify what you feel is working and what isn’t
- talk through your next steps
- decide whether a development edit is the right fit
It’s a simple, low-pressure way to gain clarity before committing to a full edit.
30-minute session: £30
